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Crispy
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hedgehog house 2 was widely disapprved of so i want you guys to tell me what you think of my ideas
ok heres the story
crispy gets a phone call from a mario kart ds tourney hearing of his skills and compete in it whilst neo is on the run from bounty hunters with the help of his friend zeffa.
so what do you think?
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Needs a bigger plot. Paragraph like, if you suppose.
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Crispy
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| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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im doing that now trust me the script is already bigger than hedgehog house 1 and 2 combined and im not done yet, when ive done ill show you guys
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| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:19 pm Post subject: |
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Show us, and post the Flash here once you think you're done. We like to approve it, and improve it before you send it to Newgrounds.
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Crispy
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| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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ive not even started on the flash yet im still doin the script
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| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:28 pm Post subject: |
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That's why I said "when you think you're finished then post here and we'll approve it, and maybe improve."
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Crispy
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| Posted: Sun Jul 01, 2007 7:35 pm Post subject: |
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well ok then ill make a start tomorow
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Mega Mike
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 8:48 pm Post subject: |
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hmmmm you should have mephiles on the track and stuff doing random funny things. and cause he's a ghost he just doesnt get it.
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Crispy
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:03 pm Post subject: |
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he doesnt appear in it anymore i cant find anywhere to put him
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Mega Mike
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| Posted: Thu Jul 12, 2007 9:50 pm Post subject: |
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when the flash is finished send me it. i bet ill find a spot to put him... even if it means popping out of the corner of the flash! also crispy the story is different from what you sent me in that storys thing.
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:52 am Post subject: |
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Make sure the Flash movie is cool enough for me to give it a 5 in Newgrounds.
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Crispy
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:14 pm Post subject: |
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im trying, well im not yet i need to do some stuff first
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 2:41 pm Post subject: |
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hmmm wonder what that is?
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 10:51 pm Post subject: |
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another flash, its the sequal to my zelda cortyard movie,
ive been asking for a map of the courtyard from majoras mask and a guy called denvish showed me a detailed map which i am curently drawing over so it looks more home made
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Mega Mike
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| Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 11:57 pm Post subject: |
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i really never watched that courtyard thing.
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